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This is a great shot, but I do have one tip that I think would make it a little better. The far side of her face is in shadow, behind her hair, and her far eye is a little buried in the corner. By turning her face just a little more, and perhaps moving the light, you could have eliminated that.
Otherwise, it's a great shot. Her expression and pose are perfect; I love the way she's pulling down one strand of hair. Your lighting is good and even, you've captured great detail on everything from her tan skin to the white corset, the background isn't distracting. This is a great shot, I just like to see a little more light on the face, and a little white on either side of the pupils.