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April 27, 2009
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model: victoria anisova
photographer: mark daughn [link]
publisher: mystique magazine [link]

the joy of a good book and time alone on a private beach
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First critique ever! :)

Well, the good points: the pose (erotic and sexy), the girl (how she plays with her hair, her look and expression), the composition and light (exposure is perfect on the whole photo, the over exposed trees and boat work for me).

On the other hand, the rock on the foreground is too distracting in my mind (the out of focus thing, and the fact the her foot is hidden), and maybe the fact that the book is a little useless in the composition (if she's reading the book, we loose her wonderful expression, and if she's not reading the book, it becomes it becomes useless).

In conlusion, the photo really deserves a :+fav: ! Great work of art!
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Once again, great work. The model is beautiful and I love the composition - I really like how it brings you in. Also, great use of lighting and the background is perfect - if it was darker, the image would not work near as well. I like how the trees are slightly overexposed - this makes for a softer foreground and really sets the mood. The book is a great touch, as well as the appearance of the model twirling her hair. I also like having the rock in the foreground as it does a great job of creating a frame and I also think it works having the model's foot behind the rock.
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~GustavBAD Nov 22, 2012  Professional Photographer
Nora Roberts, queen of romance :D
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Beautiful and sexy :)
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*markdaughn Aug 6, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you
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Omg Nice Pic
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*markdaughn Jul 30, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you
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Stunning photo! Good work! 10/10
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*markdaughn May 14, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you
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very beautiful
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*markdaughn May 14, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you
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