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I shot this image in Chicago for Luana's website.
Its was a bit tricky to not have the lights show up in the window, you have to take your time and think about the angles involved.
Model: Luana Lani
Awesome, yay for more luana shots.
I truly love this figure, the overall sensuality of her posture and expression, the choice of her looking back was a great choice. It truly gives it a sense of mystery, bringing the audiences to seek answers that allude them. The vertical stripes on the wall do work wonders for the figure, and the cityscapes as well, it pleases the overall composition. I would like the pattern of stripes upon the bedspread as well if they were brought out more, but then again it might work well because it does not distract from the focal point "figure" of the composition. However, it does lead the eye in to the figure, which is nice. This is just my thing here, I love the idea of the window so much, I wish you would have incorporated more in the overall composition. There is more to be desired, the piece when looking at it at an extended period of time, it feels a little clustered. But honestly it does work well. Good work!
thank you very much for your in depth comments, I'm pleased you liked the image
Lovely! And boy, do I know what you mean about the lights in the window! Nicely done (and what a beautiful model)!
Excellent shot... more people should pay attention to the background.
Great Shot ,
Wonderful shot Very beautiful
not enough photography knowlege to critique your work but the composition and photo are amazing. well done shot of beautiful young lady.
you did great!