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50 Dollar Project: Ribbons 1

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This was shot for my 50 Dollar Project : [link]

Model: Shelby Nicole Leyva
Image size
2000x1297px 1.1 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS-1DS
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
148 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 6, 2005, 8:19:19 AM
Sensor Size
17mm
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

My first reaction was wow, for the sunset then red shiny.

Then is started looking at it, really looking and a number of things didnt seem right. The feet, skin graduation from real to cartoon like stood out the most, (i liked the feet position) but including the incorrect shadow, just seemed wrong.

Then i noticed the impossible direction of streaming shiny red and her hair, again came across wrong, now im really questioning everything with the image, the sword position (awkward) and its purpose.

The lighting, is wrong, if her body was in this sunset etc. Now ive stopped looking at it, my suspension of disbelief broken.

Its has impact, but needs work on various elements; with me questioning every aspect, it becomes an animation like cleche. Tech i rated higher, as i still like the image, but in the fine balance between elements its was short.

TY for posting.