female erotica 1

First critique ever! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

Well, the good points: the pose (erotic and sexy), the girl (how she plays with her hair, her look and expression), the composition and light (exposure is perfect on the whole photo, the over exposed trees and boat work for me).

On the other hand, the rock on the foreground is too distracting in my mind (the out of focus thing, and the fact the her foot is hidden), and maybe the fact that the book is a little useless in the composition (if she's reading the book, we loose her wonderful expression, and if she's not reading the book, it becomes it becomes useless).

In conlusion, the photo really deserves a <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/p/p…" width="15" height="16" alt="" title="+fav" /> ! Great work of art!