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Bath time is her special time, especially when she needs to really unwind. She prepares for it as if she were preparing to make love to a man for the first time. She pulls back her long blonde hair and puts on delicate lingerie. She lights candles all around the tub, so the whole room glows. She runs hot water and adds bubble bath. As she slowly takes down the strap of her bra, and slides her hands over her flat stomach, she imagines she is stripping for her lover.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a very nice shot and this is going to be my second time today so I apologize but I am not going to be more than 80% positive on my critique as I usaually am.

First, I don't even know if I could take such a shot in terms of technique (not to mention the anticipated strong disapproval of wifey <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>). This is awsome, the light is awsome, the model is gorgeous (not big fan of implants though but nevermind) her pose is sexy, so is her nightgown... the setting is beautiful, your technique and gear perfect.

Then the whole thing should create that comfy atmosphere we should feel through the shot... And that's the point, when I look at this picture there is something of a paradox to me : the plastic is awsome but I get no feeling. Then this is not a plastic shot but the setting is made in a way that should have me feel something. And the only thing I feel is aesthetic pleasure. I am missing something...